Wednesday, 7 January 2009

My Music Magazine Draft

This is the first draft of my music Magazine. It is quite dark and it does not have any other images apart from the central image. There is a use of buzz words which is quite bold.

6 comments:

rsadiq-media said...

hahahaha ma covers betta than urz :p

jkn

JML said...

Take no notice, well done Christine, really excellent work, keep in up!

rsadiq-media said...

hahahaha christine

im ahead ov youuu!


lol

JML said...

Christine, can you please delete all of the above comments.

JML said...

Tips:

- You image is very strong and so your title needs to stand out just as much. These are really the two most important parts of the page, the areas that the audience will look at first. Make sure that the title jumps off the shelf!
- There are many different fonts and colours on the page which makes it seem quite untidy and difficult to read. Think about using just two fonts on the page and make sure that they are easy to read. A magazine is supposed to be a pleasure to read, the reader will give up very quickly if it seems like an effort.

JML said...

Also, you can soften the edges of the image in illustrator. Click on 'effect' then 'stylize' and then 'feather'. I think this will improve the quality of your image.